Book Review 2-11 Billy and the Queen

I read this book the title is Billy and the Queen.
The main story is as fallows.

The main character is Billy Parker is fourteen. He has got a sister whose name is Rox. Billy and Rox are staying at their grandmother's house in Brighton. One Sunday, Billy looks at his Bike and it was so old one. He happened to think about buying new one, but new bike are so expensive. he decied to start earing money. Then, his grandmother recommended to join the competition and get $500.

The next monday, there is a house show near Brighton and the Queen is going to be there at 11 0'clock. Billy and Rox leave at 10 o'clock. He found the Queen is standing next to a house, and he tried to take some photo of her, but he was talked to the three very tall man stand in front of him and Rox. Though he said to them about to take Queen, they oposit to them. But they had an great idea and they decided to take photo with using Manekin by Qeeun Elizabeth. They took many times and sent them to the company. Two weeks later, thier arts got the first prize!! They were so happy to hear this and they finally got 500 dollars.
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